LinkedIn profiles that convert
What follows is Chapter 37 of A Career Breakdown Kit (2026).
I expect you've read and heard many arguments about how important is to have a discoverable LinkedIn profile - one where recruiters can find you for their vacancies, including the ones that aren't advertised.
Indeed, when you hit the market, your LinkedIn profile is one of the first activities you should try and get right - because your job search can optimise for inbound leads before you think about anything else.
Yet a lot of the focus is on getting found, and there's a consequence to this that I think is worse than not getting found at all: the recruiter who reads your profile for an ideal vacancy and decides not to contact you.
And because Recruiter Licence accesses your data in a different way to the platform you use, you'll never know.
So this Chapter is the direct follow up to LinkedIn Profiles that Get Found, one which aims to convert an invisible reader to someone that contacts you for legitimate reasons. I'm going to be updating that chapter soon, with some additional findings, such as why your headline doesn't carry quite as much weight as you might think.
I should point out, as a recruiter I am quite happy for you to have a weak profile, given it means I am more likely to find you through rigour, if others rely on well specified information.
For example tomorrow I will be setting up an interview for someone who has 1 LinkedIn connection and only a job title and company name - nothing else. He came up for me because his job title matched my search, and I used an industry term in the "Company Name" section - an approach that is common for employers in that niche industry.
But as I always say - it's better to help the weakest link in the chain see you as a viable candidate because same work helps everyone.
37 - LinkedIn profiles that convert
An Amazon (job) search
When I buy a commodity item on Amazon there are two stages to my buying process.
I know what I want and I have to find an acceptable shortlist of possibilities. Only then do I assess and decide on what to buy.
As a sweaty runner that clocks up 50-60km a week, I burn through Bluetooth headphones regularly.
I’m also deaf in one ear and can’t tell the difference in higher quality sound.
My context is a little different to the normal buyer although likely no more different than most buyers are from each other.
A search on ‘Bluetooth headphones’ brings up over 2,000 results, which is hardly manageable. I change the search to ‘waterproof Bluetooth headphones’, and filter by:
£15-£30, in ear, Prime, running.
125 results. Much better.
Now I scan down the list and I ignore Sponsored. I’m not sure why.
Click on the first one with a relevant headline promising 50hrs playtime and skim past all the marketing twaddle. Who cares what they say - what do their buyers think?
I go straight to the three-star reviews because they are generally good with caveats.
One of the three-star reviews says they were offered a discount to change it to five. That’s BS that turns me right off.
I click through a few more products and buy one. The decent guarantee swung it for me.
I didn’t get past the first 40 results.
Now think about your own commodity purchases, where you have to do differing levels of research to get what you need.
What kind of search criteria do you use?
How do you filter?
What informs your decision to buy?
Perhaps you already know what you want to buy, having researched buyer guides, YouTube videos and user forums, and are just sourcing the best price.
Or maybe you need something adequate, and literally anything above an acceptable threshold will do - 5 minutes and done.
These are examples of a buyer’s journey across a transactional process.
Which isn’t far removed from how recruiters might search for candidates.
On LinkedIn and other channels.
Bringing it back to your job search
LinkedIn and Amazon - what’s the difference?
In a hiring process, they are both volume, transactional marketplaces that allow searches and filters to create an appropriate shortlist to read through.
As with a product on Amazon, your LinkedIn profile is one of many that fit similar criteria and might be found at any stage in a recruitment process.
- From a search through the Recruiter Licence
- A hiring manager reading more on a shortlisted candidate
- Their boss researching you at final interview
- Out of curiosity from a comment or post you wrote
- Checking it out on receipt of an application
- Because you were recommended
- Because you worked at a certain company
In the same way customers might visit a product page on Amazon, so too might someone hiring visit your profile.
This means that it doesn’t have to just stand on its own merits, it has to corroborate and support any other documentation a reader might have come across:
- Your CV or application
- Your LinkedIn posts and comments
- Something you did that’s in the public domain - an interview, video, article
Where there’s a conflict, such as an overly customised CV that contradicts your LinkedIn profile - that can be a problem.
Assuming your contents all support each other, the aim is to prompt an action.
Unlike an Amazon purchase, you aren’t expecting a sale, simply for the right people to start a conversation that meets your goals.
To convert interest into an action, first, you have to be found.
Think about an Amazon product page and the process you go through to buy - what do you typically read and in which order?
It’s probably something like <home page - search - list of product headlines>. My reading journey on a product page is <headline - price - delivery - three star reviews - buy now>.
How does your profile page cater to the reading psychology of a recruiter?
While a recruiter likely has access to the Recruiter Licence, you won’t. I’ll write this in a way you can emulate as a standard or Premium Member.
A standard search might go across <home page - search - list of profile headlines>. Leading to this reading priority of someone who wants to read everything (!):
- #Open to Work banner (your choice)
- Headline
- Banner
- Location / Contact details (depending on connection and privacy settings)
- Activity / Featured Section / About (the order depends on whether you have Creator mode or not)
- Experience
- Education
- Projects
- Skills
- Recommendations
Unlike Amazon reviews, I rarely look at recommendations - if I’m still interested by that point, I’ll get in touch.
You can also download your profile as a PDF, which looks like a CV with contact details, headline, summary and experience.
In both your profile and the downloadable PDF, your headline and summary / About section are going to be read before your experience is.
This is where a lot of the decision to contact you will come from.
While the career section is important, if an attention-short reader doesn’t get that far, it won’t help convert interest.
An exercise to guide your approach to updating your profile
Imagine you have been promoted and are tasked with recruiting your replacement.
The rules are that you are only allowed to search for candidates on LinkedIn through your standard membership.
You have 10 minutes to run and scan through a search and 20 minutes to form a shortlist of 3 top candidates from the results.
Location and salary don’t matter for now.
It’s likely you’ll search on your job titles, job specific skills and qualifications.
What do the results look like?
Pick your three favourite profiles from the results.
Now compare them against your own profile, step by step.
Would you make your own shortlist based purely on the content?
If not, what is it about their profiles that is preferable and how can you emulate the same in yours?
What is it in their content that has converted you from being a passive reader to having them on your imaginary shortlist?
Actionable points to update your profile (and CV too)
You want people with hiring authority to look at your profile and want to contact you.
How can you help them see you as a candidate of choice?
1. A punchy headline that says what you do and how you can help. The first four words count - those Amazon product headlines. If you don’t read further than the first four words, you’ll never know what you missed. Check out how other people’s headlines look on your mobile phone when on their profile or if they are replying to a comment on a post - lead with relevance
2. Scrap ‘I help companies by’ because it’s meaningless. Start with your job title then add a flourish or context. ‘CTO - deep tech scale-up. Equity backed and privately owned. £20m to £120m in three years’
3. Your banner - it’s free advertising real estate. Use Canva; include your contact details in case a reader doesn’t have access through your account
4. Make it easy to contact you by phone or email. Put it in multiple spots
5. About section - who do you help and how? What are your key skills and achievements? Keep it concise and focused on your ideal audience - move away from the ‘responsibilities led’ approach to CVs that get copied onto LinkedIn. Show context
6. While your career section is further down and may not even be read, it should still be fully populated and credible
7. How can you highlight posts, videos and articles to support your candidacy? The Featured Section is a useful facility in Creator mode
8. Keywords. Recruiters search on keywords. Remember all the job adverts and required skills you’ve read - does your LinkedIn profile show these suitably? While these need to be true how might differing acronyms and terminology mean the same thing?
9. Personal branding. How can you showcase your personality in your words? Your About Section is a form of elevator pitch. While it highlights your professional credibility you can also show your personal qualities. What are you most passionate about or best at? Lead with that
10. It’s not about you. It’s about the needs of your reader - tell us what we need to know to make an informed decision on your candidacy. Answer the questions that we should have through your content
11. Keep it simple and authentic
12. If there’s something you want us to know, make it clear. This could be anything from the job you want, to part-time status, to highlighting a recommendation you are proud of
I've mentioned ‘CV too’ because the same principles that let you get found apply in all of your documentation - such as on an ATS, on a job board, or with a referral. And because an optimised LinkedIn profile is a further reason why you might not customise your CV (p178).

