Arms race

Greg Wyatt • May 30, 2024

I’m sure we’ve all played around with prompting LLM to generate job adverts.

The output is an echo of the majority of content out there, with many commonly parsed phrases.

If everyone’s ‘levelling up’ their career, is anyone rising above the pack?


I think one of the problems with LLM content mirrors the problem with much human output - it lacks situational insight, and so is reliant on other means to make words stand out and be attractive.

If all you have to go on is a job title and generic job description, how else are you supposed to promote a vacancy?

This doubles down when you don’t necessarily need effective messaging if you proactively contact a candidate at the right time, in the right place, with the right offer.

The message itself carries less weight.


I’m reminded of my dog walk conversation with a neighbour who was delighted to have been headhunted for a role, by a Norwich recruiter, whose message on LinkedIn was “I’ve come across your profile on LinkedIn for a PA role you are a great fit for”.


When how the message is conveyed doesn’t seem to matter one-to-one it may not seem to matter one-to-many in a job board advert.

There is a significant caveat to this, which plays a trick when considering advert response too - more on that later.


I’m sure most people want to zhuzh up their adverts, particularly when competing with other employers for similar people, or when multiple agencies are assigned to one vacancy.

If you can’t show situational insight, what can you do?

So it is that job boards are the battleground for the adjectives arms race.


Innovative < cutting edge < leading edge < bleeding edge

Market-leading < industry-leading < world-leading

Rockstar (drunk) < ninja (backstabbing) < guru (deceptive)

Client < favourite client < best client

Great opportunity < exciting opportunity < ultimate maximum opportunity (© Bircham Wyatt Recruitment, 2020)

Hey ChatGPT, give me a list of adjectives for a job advert.


My favourite example of this kind of writing is from a Headhunter whose public advert says:

“Are you itching to level up your career?”

Needs ointment.


There are a few issues with relying on adjectives.

What happens when a reader asks:

  • What do you mean by that?

  • Why should I care?

If you can answer these questions, why aren’t you doing so in the advert, rather than letting readers guess?

What happens when they don’t ask these questions verbally and move on, to the next advert that says much the same thing?

Why would they apply to any of them, if they don’t apply to all?

If adjectives don’t show meaning, or relate to what the reader needs, you can take them out of an advert without any loss of impact.

Indeed it might even be more trustworthy, given it will come across as less try-hard.

It might even stand out, by speaking normally, when every other advert screams adjectives.


What would happen if you weren’t allowed to use adjectives or copy a job description in an advert?

How would you write it to appeal to the right people?

I expect you’d need to understand exactly who those right people are, and why they might be interested in having a conversation.

I don't think anyone’s actually looking for a ninja <job title> with a bleeding edge market leader.

What they are looking for is flexibility, job security, a better place to work, to make a difference, more money, career progression and all those personal things a job might offer that will appeal to them.

You can only find out what and how a job offers these by asking questions and gaining situational insight.

Do so, and you don’t need to rely solely on adjectives, you can show the right readers why they should respond.

Write adverts in this way and you’ll start better conversations.


That caveat above, and the trick it plays on us, is the evidence of our eyes.

If sufficient good-enough candidates respond to DMs that are formed from the same message public adverts are, it may appear the message is effective.

But what you’ll miss is the people who don’t reply, and the people who choose not to apply.

This is particularly the case in a market where many candidates need a job, and others are sceptical about moving unless it’s for exactly the right reasons.


This is one reason why recruiters may never look at improving how they write their adverts, no matter how much evidence there is that effective adverts appeal to readers who don’t apply to ineffective adverts.

Instead, it’s easy to assume there’s a candidate shortage if the market turns when readers choose not to make a first step.

It’s also why recruiters who do improve their adverts will never look back.

Not just because we know it will improve response rates, but because the work required to generate effective adverts, makes vacancies more fillable.

Thanks for reading.

Regards,

Greg

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Not forgetting fellow job seekers you can share experiences with - as long as you don't dwell on the negative. And it's also about writing in a way that is both true to you and your profession - because conversation has to follow in the same voice as you write, and should support your work, when in work. It's a strategy and philosophy that mirrors earlier chapters on networking, doorknocking, getting found and converting interest. It isn't about writing credible statements in a content savvy way that shares unprovable anecdotes, hacks that lack substance, and where a funnel means more than a lesson. That way is the way of social media marketing - this is about conversations that matter. 40 - Content strategy and philosophy While a personal brand might be the goal, your content strategy should be the priority. It can be applied even if you don’t like the idea of branding. Much is made about LinkedIn’s algorithm and how you need to do this that and the other to get engagement. You can look at it differently, ignoring the algorithm on the whole, and still achieve much the same. These are the outcomes I aim for and see when writing content: Start conversations Help others Sharpen and spark ideas Raise awareness and trust Have a laugh and a chat I’ve gained friends I’ve never spoken to and friendly acquaintances I only know through ‘comments.’ As well as paying clients who have benefitted from my service. Just as importantly, I have more credibility with candidates who place weight on LinkedIn content. Content makes it easier for me to start conversations. It’s important for me that I either enjoy the content and its consequences or find it fulfilling. I don’t talk openly about my personal life, family or challenges. Something I agreed with my wife when I started publishing content. Instead, I show all of myself in my words - quirks and all. So that if we ever speak in real life, there isn’t much of a disconnect. Start with other people’s content Find content writers who inspire you and use them as a catalyst for your own words. There are two ways to do this. Firstly, if you’re thinking about writing on LinkedIn, you are presumably already reading content. What inspires you? What do you enjoy reading? Which authors resonate with your career, your values, your goals and the problems you solve? When you read their content, do you engage and comment? Do you connect with them? Do you ask them who they recommend as writers in your field? Secondly, look within. What do you want to be known for in your career? Maybe it’s procurement or your CIPD membership. React or agile. 5 Whys or Gemba. If these are areas that interest you, use the LinkedIn search bar to find posts on these topics. Now filter the results by ‘Posts’ and ‘Sort by’ latest. Read through the results both for posts that interest you and those that have high engagement (less likely on a niche topic). When you’ve found inspiring content, what next ? One first step in content creation is to respond to these posts with your own ideas. Less ‘Agree’ and more how you might respond in a real-life conversation on this topic. Commenting on other people’s posts is a good way to find your voice, particularly if the conversation continues. Like any skill, writing takes practice, and comments are a low-friction way of developing your tone. If a comment sparks interest from other readers, it can be a concept to build on as a post in its own right. The other benefit of this kind of niche content is that those who engage are likely to have similar interests to you. Make sure to read other comments and see if there are more conversations to be had. The comments you build with them can be the start of a mutually beneficial relationship. Check out their profiles - do their interests and values reflect yours? These are people to connect with, then DM to continue the conversation. 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These writers are more interested in engagement numbers than your specific interest. You can see the truth of their words in how they respond in the comments sections. From a marketing perspective, different types of content have different places in your lead generation: Awareness Interest Consideration Evaluation Purchase Each post, comment, DM and real-life conversation can relate to these steps and support your goals, even if you aren’t treating these as a marketing activity. Time and time again There’s a lot of investigation into optimal times to post. It’s more important that you are available to reply attentively in the first hour. The course of a post is often dictated by the performance during this time. I actively reply to comments for around an hour a day with LinkedIn on in the background of other work. How much time can you set aside per week and per day for content? Even if you only write a couple of posts a week, this will probably take a couple of hours. 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I’m pleased to say his redo was excellent, showing off his charisma while delivering the same message. Who can you rely on to be this CEO for you in your career? Why you should start now, even if you don’t see any benefit for months. Starting cold on LinkedIn can take time to get traction. When your first post bombs you might never think to do a second. Going in with the expectation of little impact for the first three to six months is healthy in making a sustainable habit. If you’re out of work though, three to six months may seem too far off to be worthwhile when there are many activities that offer a quick turnaround, such as applying for jobs. I’ve spoken to many job seekers who’ve been out of work for more than six months and had decided not to write content at the outset of their search. If they had, they might now be seeing the benefit of their work.